what a cool vn. it feels very warm and cozy, kind of giving off dawn chorus vibes in that matter. i love all of the characters, theyre all so cute!! the artstyle is very smooth and easy on the eyes. cant wait for more!!
Have to finish some other VNs before I jump into this one, but this is genuinely the most excited I've been to start a visual novel since Repeat remake dropped. Thanks in advance for the good read!
Thoroughly enjoyed this hidden gem of a work in progress visual novel. I would like to thank the itch.io furry tag for bringing me here.
To the team behind it: The premise is interesting, the characters are fun and interesting, the music choices were nice, and of course the sprites and cgs were really good. Rare for a version 0.2 to have diverse emotive sprites for their characters, as well as the cgs present too.
All in all, enjoyed it, and look forward to what you'll all make next.
This caught my eye recently and I just had to try it. Gotta hand it to y'all! A great game and still in development. I think this game is kicking off to a brilliant start.
All the characters are great, each with their own past (with our main protagonist having a more disturbed past than the others I reckon).
In addition, I suspect that the game is inspired or based off of the poem Stomping by the woods on a snowy evening by Robert Frost? 'Cause during the 'dream scene' I find the words similar to it.
I could be wrong there, but feel free to correct me! Also, I noticed some errors on the grammar, just one or two, other else than that, I think the game might become well known among the community!
I've read quite a few furry visual novels over the past year or so, but this has to be one of, if not the most comfy ones yet. The art, music, and story all play really well together to create a very peaceful and enjoyable read. I honestly don't know I'd I could pick a favorite from the cast. They all have certain things that really stand out and draw me in. I think Theo is probably the one I'm most interested. I have a thing for older men, sue me. :P One quick question though, what is the age of all the cast members? I can't 100% remember, but I believe everyone other than Theo would be in their early-ish twenties, and I know Artemis mentioned Theo being in his thirties. I can't remember if anything more specific was given.
The cast don't have super specific ages, but you have it right! Theo is a bit older than the rest, and Hunter is the youngest/still in college. Everyone else is in-between!
PtK has fast become a feel good VN for me~ 😌 it's mushy in all the right ways and just serious enough for it not to be clawingly sweet 😋 I'm a pretty big fan of NSFW, but I 100% stand behind the choice to keep this project clean 🙂
I think it was a real clever artistic decision to add piercings to Artemis's beanie (as he doesn't have ears) to make him look more punk rock 😉
Might I make a suggestion concerning the scene where the power goes out? I think Hunter's response to Arti's aggressive approach was a little tame. He doesn't have to go full on jock, but I think Hunter being more assertive would not just feel more natural (unless he doesn't do well with conflict), but it would also help to make the situation feel a little more tense. Just a suggestion of course.
Omg, Ollie is too damn adorable for his own good! 😳 And that's saying a lot, because Rofi is dogdamn adorable~ ☺️ really liked his reaction to being asked about dating Artemis.
The game is really cute and beautiful, and the rendering of the scenes is very atmospheric. Author, thank you for bringing us such a good work. I really like this game and have already reviewed it once, but I'm going to post it again.
We would say it's closer to a Kinetic VN (where each route has a story that won't change significantly) than a traditional VN where there are bad endings and alternate routes. The biggest choice for the player will be the character they'd like to get closer to and the routes themselves will influence how the other characters' stories go (e.g. getting closer to character A might mean character B does something different in the background of A's route).
Hey axel! I was wondering you'd put my visual novel (lost) on your page when the first build is finally finished! I visit your page all the time to read and I'd be so happy and proud to see my own there!
It's super comfy so far, and pretty topical considering the snow I've had recently haha. Can't wait to see more, especially with how cute the designs are :p
by the by, any chance you'll make an android version in the future?
That was the idea behind a January release ;) super glad you liked what you saw so far! An android version of the game is definitely on our to-do list and we plan to make it happen at some point -- we'll update this page with future plans soon!!
Hi! VN looks eerily promising. Very cool sprites, a huge amount of CSGs that flesh out the story and allow you to get into the characters. I like Theo and Hunter the best so far. Email me in discord please, I'd like to discuss something! (septer.)
wow, this was really cute and cozy. an atmospheric slice of life. it pulls you into the main character's world right away. all the characters personalities are pretty well defined so far. also, production value is through the roof and all the art and music are so well made >w<
loved the first build. seems like it's gonna be a slow-paced, but nonetheless enjoyable vn. looking forward to see where this goes!
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what a cool vn. it feels very warm and cozy, kind of giving off dawn chorus vibes in that matter. i love all of the characters, theyre all so cute!! the artstyle is very smooth and easy on the eyes. cant wait for more!!
Will there be any NSFW scenes in this game?
Read the first sentence of this page
Sorry There Buddy This is a SFW One Silly
Wonderful VN already. Could go over everything I loved, but id just end up recreating the entire thing in my comment!
I adore Rofi! Yall keep up the great work.
so. good. i have nothing more to say, but keep up the awesome work
the photo looking to the sky is beautiful, but, MC was wearing heavy boots, so those step marks are wront.
Have to finish some other VNs before I jump into this one, but this is genuinely the most excited I've been to start a visual novel since Repeat remake dropped. Thanks in advance for the good read!
Just played it. It was everything I'd hoped for
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Thoroughly enjoyed this hidden gem of a work in progress visual novel. I would like to thank the itch.io furry tag for bringing me here.
To the team behind it: The premise is interesting, the characters are fun and interesting, the music choices were nice, and of course the sprites and cgs were really good. Rare for a version 0.2 to have diverse emotive sprites for their characters, as well as the cgs present too.
All in all, enjoyed it, and look forward to what you'll all make next.
Super appreciative of your support! It's always interesting to hear how our players find us :)
This game is so adorable, I love all these characters different personalities.
Thank you so much!
Does android got the new update
Yes! The Android build is in the devlog with the new update!
This caught my eye recently and I just had to try it. Gotta hand it to y'all! A great game and still in development. I think this game is kicking off to a brilliant start.
All the characters are great, each with their own past (with our main protagonist having a more disturbed past than the others I reckon).
In addition, I suspect that the game is inspired or based off of the poem Stomping by the woods on a snowy evening by Robert Frost? 'Cause during the 'dream scene' I find the words similar to it.
I could be wrong there, but feel free to correct me! Also, I noticed some errors on the grammar, just one or two, other else than that, I think the game might become well known among the community!
Thank you and looking forward to more content!
Super good eye -- the game's name actually came from the poem, and the dream sequence was inspired by it!
Feel free to join us over on Discord! Our server has a great community going and we have a channel for grammar and bug reports :)
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I've read quite a few furry visual novels over the past year or so, but this has to be one of, if not the most comfy ones yet. The art, music, and story all play really well together to create a very peaceful and enjoyable read. I honestly don't know I'd I could pick a favorite from the cast. They all have certain things that really stand out and draw me in. I think Theo is probably the one I'm most interested. I have a thing for older men, sue me. :P One quick question though, what is the age of all the cast members? I can't 100% remember, but I believe everyone other than Theo would be in their early-ish twenties, and I know Artemis mentioned Theo being in his thirties. I can't remember if anything more specific was given.
The cast don't have super specific ages, but you have it right! Theo is a bit older than the rest, and Hunter is the youngest/still in college. Everyone else is in-between!
I haven't finished all the routes... but Theooo why are you so dreamyyyy why are you so hottt why do I desire u so much qwq
You're in good company -- he's quite popular in our Discord server!
I was gonna try Hunter route... but decided to go back and do Theo route again :3
PtK has fast become a feel good VN for me~ 😌 it's mushy in all the right ways and just serious enough for it not to be clawingly sweet 😋 I'm a pretty big fan of NSFW, but I 100% stand behind the choice to keep this project clean 🙂
I think it was a real clever artistic decision to add piercings to Artemis's beanie (as he doesn't have ears) to make him look more punk rock 😉
Might I make a suggestion concerning the scene where the power goes out? I think Hunter's response to Arti's aggressive approach was a little tame. He doesn't have to go full on jock, but I think Hunter being more assertive would not just feel more natural (unless he doesn't do well with conflict), but it would also help to make the situation feel a little more tense. Just a suggestion of course.
Omg, Ollie is too damn adorable for his own good! 😳 And that's saying a lot, because Rofi is dogdamn adorable~ ☺️ really liked his reaction to being asked about dating Artemis.
Fun update, I love what xou're doing 💜
The game is really cute and beautiful, and the rendering of the scenes is very atmospheric. Author, thank you for bringing us such a good work. I really like this game and have already reviewed it once, but I'm going to post it again.
Please stick with this, okay?
the update is today wiiii
I just finished playing the pilot and......
AAAAAAAH
SO CUTE!!!!
I'm in love with this game
I can tell that Theo has some..... experiences that he's had to deal with. The signs are all there!!
I wanna give him a hug🥹🥹🥹
The three I'm eyeing especially is, in this order:
Hunter
Theo
Rofi
To be completely honest with you....
This vn might make it to the tier where Tennis Ace and Dawn Chorus are at, which is the highest tier for me XD
I love this!! Can't wait for more!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️✨✨✨✨✨😍😍😍😍😍
What is the hidden romance in the game?
You can mark the PC zip as also running on linux, it already contains all the files needed.
Will there be an android version at all in the future?!
Yes! We're actually planning to make an announcement for that very soon... stay tuned :)
Very pleasing read I had! Adorable cast and the art is amazing too!! Cannot wait to see what y'all have in store :D
Honestly this is a very solid vn with a nice premise and fantastic execution. The character designs are unique and pleasant on the eyes.
However the phone sound effect sounds exactly like how my phone buzzes on my desk, so I always check it every time it's used.
Honestly really looking forward to the development of this vn!
Is this a Kinetic VN or one that has choices?
We would say it's closer to a Kinetic VN (where each route has a story that won't change significantly) than a traditional VN where there are bad endings and alternate routes. The biggest choice for the player will be the character they'd like to get closer to and the routes themselves will influence how the other characters' stories go (e.g. getting closer to character A might mean character B does something different in the background of A's route).
Great VN! Waitng for updates...
We're already hard at work :)
Great beggining!!! congratulations, I am already longing for the update!
Can you do Android?
We're planning to look into an Android version over the next two months, and will have an update soon regarding this!
I play a lot of VN's and I absolutely love to see a new title with great potential, keep up the great work!
Thank you so much -- and we appreciate the feedback in your review!
Hey axel! I was wondering you'd put my visual novel (lost) on your page when the first build is finally finished! I visit your page all the time to read and I'd be so happy and proud to see my own there!
It's me again, just wanted to say how amazing the pilot was publicly :)
Wholesome, cozy and friendly vibes :3
Can't wait to see more!
I'll help spread it around!
I had a fun time playing this game the art is nice I'm looking forward to updates :)
I am still in the beggining but... if power is off how does the bell ringed?
🤔🤔🤔
It's super comfy so far, and pretty topical considering the snow I've had recently haha. Can't wait to see more, especially with how cute the designs are :p
by the by, any chance you'll make an android version in the future?
That was the idea behind a January release ;) super glad you liked what you saw so far! An android version of the game is definitely on our to-do list and we plan to make it happen at some point -- we'll update this page with future plans soon!!
How many routes are there going to be in this?
We're planning to have five routes -- one for each of the five characters you meet in the pilot!
Thank god! I was worried that the lone scalie wasn't datable hah!
Thank you so much for your interest!
What a pleasant read! Impressive first build, music and artwork is on point too. Glad to be along for this ride.
We appreciate the praise! Thank you!
Hi! VN looks eerily promising. Very cool sprites, a huge amount of CSGs that flesh out the story and allow you to get into the characters. I like Theo and Hunter the best so far. Email me in discord please, I'd like to discuss something! (septer.)
Theo and Hunter seem to be leading in popularity so far... let's see if that continues!
wow, this was really cute and cozy. an atmospheric slice of life. it pulls you into the main character's world right away. all the characters personalities are pretty well defined so far. also, production value is through the roof and all the art and music are so well made >w<
loved the first build. seems like it's gonna be a slow-paced, but nonetheless enjoyable vn. looking forward to see where this goes!
Thank you so much for the review! We're super glad you enjoyed the pilot :) stay tuned for game news and updates coming soon!